Editorial Report Outline

1. Plot and Structure

• Plot Arc: Analysis of the overarching plot, its flow, and pacing.
• Inciting Incident and Key Turning Points: Evaluation of the initial hook and major turning points, assessing if they build tension effectively.
• Climax and Resolution: Feedback on the climax’s effectiveness and the resolution’s impact.
• Subplot Integration: Assessment of how well subplots contribute to and enhance the main storyline.

2. Character Development

• Main Character Arc: Analysis of protagonist motivations, growth, and internal conflict.
• Secondary Characters: Evaluation of depth and distinctiveness for supporting characters, assessing their contribution to the story.
• Dialogue and Voice: Feedback on character dialogue—consistency, believability, and individuality.
• Relationships: Analysis of key character relationships and their impact on the story arc.

3. Setting and World-Building

• World Consistency and Plausibility: Evaluation of any unique worlds or settings, their plausibility, and coherence.
• Sensory Details and Atmosphere: Assessment of how well setting descriptions engage readers and add depth.
• Integration with Plot: Feedback on how the setting or world influences character decisions and story progression.

4. Writing Style and Voice

• Narrative Voice: Analysis of authorial voice and tone, ensuring it suits the genre and target audience.
• Sentence Structure and Flow: Evaluation of language fluidity, sentence variety, and overall readability.
• Show vs. Tell: Feedback on descriptive balance—highlighting areas where more showing could enhance immersion.
• Overall Writing Quality: Identifying patterns of strengths and areas for improvement in writing style.

5. Areas for Revision

• Structural Changes: Specific sections that may need cuts, expansions, or rearrangements for greater impact.
• Clarity and Focus: Identification of portions that may confuse readers or dilute the main plot.
• Plot Holes and Consistencies: Pointing out any logical inconsistencies or gaps in the story.
• Pacing Adjustments: Suggestions for chapters or scenes that may need trimming or expanding.

6. Strengths and Recommendations

• Overall Strengths: Summary of what works well, from characterisation to setting.
• Suggested Revisions: Tailored recommendations for addressing weaknesses and next steps in the editing process.